In my opinion, yes it's a very good poem. You have a very good understanding and way with the English language.The only thing I'd say about it is that idols and trolls don't rhyme unless you pronounce idols in a forced way. also Id turn the line "usually forbid to mortals" into "usually forbid to mere mortals" to make it flow better. Or not, whatever. It's excellent as it is.
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